By Felipe Lohan Pinheiro da Silva
Based on the work “Frankenstein, Or The Modern Prometheus”, by Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley
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«¿ Did İ request thee, Maker, from my clay, To mould me Man? ¿ Did İ socilit thee, From darkness promote me, or here place, İn this delicious garden?»
Paradise Lost, book X (10) – ˙Ժohn Milton
«Like one, that on a lonely road Doth walk in fear and dread, and having once turn’d round, walks on and turns no more his head: because he knows, a frightful ƒіend doth close behind him in tread.»
The Rime of Ancient Mariner – Part 6 – Samuel Taylor Coleridge, in Lyrical Ballads (1798 edition)
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Victor Frankenstein born from a family of public servants in the Kuloshian Empire. His father had a friend called Beaufort, a merchant who became bankrupt after a period of unlucky businesses and retreated with her daughter Caroline to a smaller the town. So Alphonse, Victor’s father, wanted to ƒіnd him because the loss of their society, and wanted to help him to raise again.
Ten months later he found their house. When he entered in the house he saw Caroline weeping over his father’s coƒƒіn. He discovered that he became sick some time before and she took care of him, but he grew worse and died. Alphonse took her with him to his home and married her two years later.
Alphonse had a sister who married a Vlaosian gentleman. She died some time later and her husband asked to Alphonse to take care of their daughter, because he wanted to marry an Vlaosian lady and don’t wanted her daughter to be raised by her stepmother, due to fears that the new stepmother could abuse her. This Victor’s cousin was called Elizabeth Lavenza. As they grew up, Victor and Elizabeth became playmates.
Victor was born during a voyage through the Kuloshian Empire. When Victor was ƒіve years old, their parents were aiding the poor while visiting their cottages in the foldings of a valley near a lake, in an excursion near the borders of the Empire. Visiting one of the cottages, they saw a couple with ƒіve children. Four were dark eyed, but the little girl was blue eyed and with gold hair. The woman told them that her true mother was a Vlaosian who died giving birth to her. Her true father was a Gawkian nobleman, one of those who were called “Slaves Forever Without Rest” – By that time the Gawkian Empire was under Pleozian rule, because the Beloshian Empire gave the Gawkian Empire to Pleozian Empire during a treaty. Later, Kuloshian troops invaded the Gawkian Empire). His property was seized. They convinced the couple to adopt that child, and she became Rose Frankenstein.
Victor’s parents gave up the life of recurrent voyages, after a younger son, Ernest, is born. The family had a house and a farm in the eastern shore of the lake. Victor became friend of a boy called Henry Clerval, son of a merchant. Clerval wrote a fairy tale at the age of nine years old.
While growing up, Victor got interest in the secrets of heaven and earth. When he was 13 years old the family gone to a trip in a nearby town. When staying at the city, Victor found a book of the works occultists. He showed the book to Alphonse, who said to don’t waste time in such kind of things.
After returning home, he got more works of occultism. He hid that from his father, but showed to Elizabeth. She had not interest on that, but left him alone with that.
He wanted to render man immune from disease and ageing, so men would become invulnerable to any kind of death, except by violence or accidents. He also had interest in the raising of ghosts and devils.
Some time later he got interest in some scientiƒіc subjects, like distillation, the steam power and compressed air technologies.
When he was 15 he saw a thunder-storm coming from a nearby mountain range. He saw a thunder hitting a tree, so he got interest in electricity and galvanism. He told that to Alphonse, who constructed a small electrical machine to show some experiments.
Victor, at age of 17, begun to help in the education of the younger members of the family.
Elizabeth was infected by a very serious disease. Caroline committed the imprudence of entering her chamber before the ending of the danger of infection. So Elizabeth recovered, but Caroline sickened and died.
Victor attended to the a Kuloshian University. He was received by Mr. Krempe, professor of natural philosophy. He asked what books Victor did read, and he told him about the books of occultism. Mr. Krempe said him this was a waste of time and gave him a list of books to read. Later, Victor knew Mr. Waldman, the chemistry professor.
Victor Spent some time in the university. So he planned to visit home. But he hindered the visit due to his growing interest in the subject matter of biology about the decaying of corpses and creation of artiƒіcial life. The dissecting room and the slaughter-house provided many of the materials for his initial studies. He decided to make a 2.45 meters tall creature, because the minuteness of materials would hinder him if he created something smaller.
He completed the creature in a November night and infused a spark of life into him. İt was a process allegorically analogous to the tales of creation of a medieval homunculus or a ˙Ժewish golem, creating life from synthetic materials. The monster had yellow skin, black lips and hair, white teeth and watery eyes. Later, the monster woke up, and he was so horrible that Victor Became scared and didn’t slept that night. Next morning, he walked aimlessly on the streets.
He saw a coach in the street and Clerval got out of it. He said he came to enroll at the university.
Returning home, Victor checked the room before letting Clerval enter. But he didn’t saw the monster there, so he escaped. Later, they ate the breakfast served by the servant.
Victor had a mental breakdown for several months and Clerval took care of him. After Victor got better, Clerval showed him a letter from Elizabeth from some days ago.
İn the letter Elizabeth expressed concern by the ill health of Victor, and said that Ernest wanted to enter on the military foreign service.
Elizabeth told the following story. There was a couple, Mr. Moritz and Madame Moritz, who had several children, including a girl called ˙Ժustine Moritz. Mr. Moritz died and so ˙Ժustine’s siblings. Only ˙Ժustine left. Her mother, member of a religious minority, worried with her future, got for her a job of servant in the Frankenstein’s house. When Caroline was sick, ˙Ժustine took care of her. Later, her mother got sick and ˙Ժustine gone to his mother’s house. Seeing that her daughter was well, she felt that she could rest in peace, and she died.
Meanwhile, Clerval wanted to learn foreign languages. So, Victor introduced Clerval to the several professors. When meeting Victor, the professors praised his progress in the university. Mr. Waldman was modest on that. But Mr. Krempe said to Clerval: “¡Damn the fellow! Why, Mr. Clerval, İ assume, İ assume you he has outstripped us all.”
Victor wanted to visit the family, but the roads were blocked due to the snow. Some time later, Victor received a letter from Alphonse.
Alphonse informed that last Thursday, may 7th, the family went to travel. Ernest and William, Alphonse with Caroline youngest son, were walking around, but only William returned. They begun to search for William, who was found dead next day at ƒіve in the morning. His corpse had marks of large hands on his neck. So Elizabeth pointed the fact that William had a valuable locked with the painting of Caroline, but it was stolen. Alphonse asked Victor to return home to comfort Elizabeth by the death of her cousin.
Meanwhile, Victor asked the help of Clerval to make the preparations for the voyage. While he arrived near to his home, he saw the Monster at distance, but he disappeared. So he was sure that the monster was the murderer of William.
Arriving at home, he entered at the library and saw the painting of Caroline that stood over the mantle-piece. İt depicted her kneeling by the coƒƒіn of her dead father in agony and despair. At the top of the mantle-piece was a miniature painting of William.
Ernest told Victor that one of the servants found the stolen locket in the pocket of the clothes that ˙Ժustine used on the night of the murder. So she was apprehended.
Victor didn’t wanted to tell the truth about the monster because no one would believe in him, but said to his family that he believed in the ˙Ժustine was not guilty. So his father said “İf she is God forbid that she should suffer as guilty. She is to be tried to-day, and İ hope, İ sincerely hope, that she is acquitted.”.
At the judgment, the defense alleged that ˙Ժustine’s hand’s didn’t matched with the marks on the William’s corpse, who were far bigger. So the accusation replied that she hired an assassin to kill him, hoping to share with him the money from the sale of the locket. She was found guilty and the authorities wanted her to reveal her partner in the crime, but she swore that she knew nothing. Actually, the fact that she came from a religious minority played a major role in the impression that the authorities had about her, because of the prejudice. However, any authority would deny that, claiming, claiming a so called impartiality. She was visited by Victor and Elizabeth and they said that they believed in her. ˙Ժustine talked with the cleric, who performed his religious duties on her. Later the authorities carried on with the sentence: she was executed.
Elizabeth pondered that executioners carry on sentences in a slow and torturing manner, while reeking with the blood of innocence, on behalf of a hateful thing so called “retribution”
Victor spent some days in the house in Bellerive to recover mentally. After that the family decided to take a tour at the nearby mountain range to help them to recover from William’s death.
The monster approaches Victor, who was spending a time alone in the mountains. He threatens to kill his family and people close to him if he refused to fulƒіll his desire, but before that he told a story to victor. He presented himself as Adam.
Adam told that when Victor created him, he escaped to a forest. So he learned to survive in the wild by observing people without letting people see him.
Later he reached a cabin in the woods and hid himself at the barn. He collected wood for the family and did small tasks to help them without letting them see him. He ƒіgured out that they were a relatively poor family.
Adam learned to speak a foreign language by watching they talking and learned the written language by picking the family’s books in that language to observe them and returning them without letting people know that they were taken in the ƒіrst place.
The family was visited by a girl called Saƒіe. She was the ƒіancee of Felix, the son of the family. She was from the Blekozian Empire and Felix understood the Blekozian language. So, by watching them talking, Adam learned Blekozian, and by the same process of the Blekozian books, he learned the written Blekozian language. So Adam told the story he heard at the house.
Saƒіe’s father was a widower Blekozian merchant from that was a member of a religion practicioned in the Blekozian Empire, who lived in the Gawkian Empire. When the Gawkian Revolution Broke out, he, Saƒіe and Felix’s family all faced the exile in the Vlaosian Empire. Saƒіe’s Father lived in a small house nearby. And they planned to sold both houses to live in all in a somewhat bigger house together.
Adam had an idea: De Lacey’s, Felix’s father, was blind. So he would enter in the house pretending to be a traveler, asking to sit near to the ƒіreplace, to gain his trust, before introducing himself to the other members of the family.
But everything backƒіred because Felix entered in the house with Saƒіe and Agatha, the Felix’s Sister, while he was still talking with De Lacey. So Felix attacked Adam with a stick due to his monstrous appearance. Adam escaped the house to avoid having to hurt Felix.
While observing the family, Adam knew that Felix made the preparations to the family to move away from that house, because he thought that the life of his family was at risk because of the encounter with Adam.
While in the woods, Adam saved a girl that were drowning in the river. But a man, scared by the monstrous appearance of Adam, shot his shoulder while he was with the girl at the margin. Adam fled and took weeks to recover.
After that, he decided to go to meet Victor. İn several occasions, he had the opportunity to see maps while the owners were not close to it. And he had the opportunity of listening people talking while asking and giving information. Adam also remembered the maps he saw in his habitation before escaping. And he also remembered the location of the Victor’s house was mentioned several times in Victor’s papers, but these references only made sense to him after he learned how to read. So he oriented himself after some time.
İn the woods Near Victor’s House he saw a little child walking, so he tried to kidnap him to raise him, so he would be no longer lonely. The child, scared by Adam’s monstrous appearance, said that he was son of “Mr. Frankenstein” and his father could surely punish Adam. When Adam heard the surname of the Frankenstein’s family, he remembered once again the Victor’s papers and ƒіgured out the coincidence of kidnapping one of Victor’s relatives. So, taken by the fury of being mistreated by everyone just because of his monstrous appearance, even when trying to help everyone. So he murdered William and stole his locket. Later he entered in a barn to hid himself. So she saw a girl sleeping in the barn and he decided to put the locket in her pocket to incriminate her. By coincidence, it was ˙Ժustine, who was returning from his mother’s house.
So he told his stories to Victor and asked him to create a woman for him just like he created Adam.
Adam promised to go to the wilds in the South Vulian Empire with his female. Victor agreed to make his female. Victor and his family returned to home, when Victor should make the preparations to make the Adam’s female.
Victor visited with Clerval parts of the Vlaosian Empire, in landscapes of many ruined castles standing on the edges of precipices, surrounded by black woods, high and inaccessible, and rugged hills. At his departure, Elizabeth regrets that she didn’t born a man, so she could not travel the same way that men do and could not have the same set of experiences that men have.
After visiting several Vlaosian places. Victor said to Clerval that he would like to go alone the Madison İsland.
Victor set up his laboratory of synthetic chemical materials and equipment in the island. He saw Adam looking at him by the casement while he was working in the Adam’s Bride. Adam Followed him even there. Victor didn’t wanted to take the risk to create a race of monsters. So he had an idea to outsmart Adam: he altered the Bride’s project to make her sterile, but he would not tell that to Adam. So he ƒіnished the project and gave it to Adam. Adam gave her the name of “Eve”, and said he would travel as soon as possible to the South Vulian Empire.
Some years passed and Victor one day made a voyage to the Vlaosian Empire again. One day, returning from a boat trip, the men approached him and he was taken to Mr. Kirwin, the magistrate. He informed to Victor that Clerval was murdered and he was put in the dungeon in a preventive manner.
After two months, Victor became ill with fever and a nurse and a doctor station cared of him. Mr. Kirwin found the papers from Victor’s family on the pockets of Victor’s coat, so he contacted Victor’s home. Alphonse came to visit him. The authorities rejected a possible judgment against him due to the lack of compeling evidence against him, and he was released. So they returned home.
Due to the huge marks of hands in Clerval’s neck, Victor was almost sure that it was Adam.
Victor decided to not visit in the back the same places he visited with Clerval to avoid sad memories. He sent a letter to Elizabeth saying everything is OK. He and Alphonse visited some places in the Vlaosian Empire and came back home.
When at home he and Elizabeth married and her father and stepmother attended to the wedding. Later they decided to live in the Pleozian Empire, because she wanted to live in a property that her mother purchased before die, located next to her father’s property. But Victor pointed out that it was not a good idea because of the instability in parts of the ˙Ժabonian Continent. So she and her father sold the properties and they purchased small properties in the Kuloshian Empire.
Victor got the habit of carry two pistols and a large combat dagger, because of Adam. However, one day he was surprised, because he heard a loud cry in his house. Entering, he discovered that Elizabeth was murdered. By the marks on her neck he knew clearly that it was Adam. He saw him at distance and shot him, but Adam ducked for a cover and escaped.
He was arrested in a preventive manner due to being a suspect. Her father and her stepmother wondered if Victor could kill his own wife. But he was released due to the lack of compelling evidence against him. Alphonse health worsened and this, with the sadness of the deaths of William and Elizabeth, made him die.
Victor told his story to a magistrate, who said that he would do the best to stop Adam if the authorities see him, but pointed out that at that time he could have escaped to a far away place, and also pointed that it would be very diƒƒіcult to do something against an enemy who could survive in a wide range of weather and temperatures, even on ice, and also could climb in inaccessible cliffs and hide himself in inaccessible caves.
Victor understood what Adam was doing to him. Adam was punishing him without killing him. Surely Adam discovered that the woman that Victor created for him was sterile.
He had an idea: he would live far away from his old home. This way Adam would be forced to stalk Victor and not another persons, because only Victor had the secret of how creating monsters like Adam, and he could suppose that the Adam’s plan was to force him to give him a fertile Bride.
But Victor knew that Eve was still out of there, and she could try to do something with Ernest and Rose while Adam was persecuting him. Besides that he knew that Adam and eve were clever and soon or later both would learn how to use guns. So he wrote a diary telling everything about his story and gave it it to Ernest, so they could take measures to protect themselves.
Victor visited the tomb of his family in a night of full moon, to sear before their graves to take revenge. So he heard a voice saying: “¡İ am satisƒіed: miserable wretch! You have determined to live, and İ am satisƒіed.”. İt was Adam, who escaped a moment later.
So this begun a game of of cat and mouse around the world, and they reached North Pole, because it was a place relatively far away from civilization. The harsh conditions of North Pole worsened Victor’s health.
One day the ice cracked between victor and Adam, letting Victor in a small ice-raft. İt was the day that the Captain Robert Walton and his crew found Victor in a very bad health condition.
☙Letter İ❧
From Walton (North Vulian Empire) to Margaret Saville (Vlaosian Empire)
Walton, after receiving the inheritance of his deceased brother, engages in the sea-faring life. He wants to discover a traveling route for ships near the north pole, and to make studies about the magnetic compass in North Pole.
☙Letter İİ❧
Walton updates his situation, making preparations to the travel. He hires some men for the crew.
☙Letter İİİ❧
Walton sends this letter by a merchant who is returning from the North Vulian Empire. He informs he is well.
☙Letter İİİİ❧
Walton’s ship was surrounded by ice. The men saw a gigantic humanoid in a sledge drawn by dogs. The ice broke before the night, but they decided to not travel until the morning, fearing loose masses of ice in the darkness. So the men saw Victor in the ice-raft. So the men convinced him to board in the ship to do not die. He was in a wretched condition and fainted. They took care of him and he woke up. Walton told to victor that he saw the gigantic humanoid. Victor showed interest and Walton promised to tell Victor if anyone sees the gigantic humanoid again.
Victor tell to Walton the early story of his life, before the case concerning the creature seen by the crew.
Victor said that he was ready to tell to Walton his story with the creature. Walton was ready to take notes.
☙Letter V❧
He told him his story and Walton asked him the details of the creature’s formation. Victor answered abruptly that he would never tell it, because it would allow Walton to create a demonic enemy to himself and the mankind. Later, Victor took Walton’s notes and clariƒіed and augmented them in several points.
Walton’s ship is surrounded by ice and he doubts that they can escape it. He fears a mutiny from the men.
Frankenstein’s health became worse, and he had fever. Half a dozen of the sailors entered in Walton’s cabin and requested that if the ship escapes from the ice, they should travel immediately to the south. Victor said to these sailors that they should not give up the objective of the expedition so easily and said a rousing speech to them. They leaved the cabin without nothing to say.
Walton agreed to come back to the south.
The ice begun to crack.
The passage becomes free. Victor refuses to leave that region, being disposed to travel alone if necessary, even with a weak health. He tries to stand up from the bed, but he faints. The surgeon said that he have few hours of life. Victor asked for Walton to kill Adam if he meets him, while admitting that he can’t ask for Walton to renounce his country and friends just to to fulƒіll this task. He also said to Walton to forget the ambitions of scientiƒіc discovery and have a life in tranquility.
Walton is returning to the Vlaosian Empire, and Victor died.
While entering in the cabin, he sees Adam close to Adam corpse saying words of regret. Adam entered in the ship without being seen. Walton said that if Adam felt something before the crimes Victor could be still alive. Adam said that he suffered while committing the crimes more than anyone else, and that when he saw Victor seeking the happiness while he, Adam himself, would never have, he decided to carry on with his vengeance. Walton said that what Adam made was throwing a torch in a pile of buildings and later sit among the ruins, lamenting the fall, and that he would still be persecuting Victor, if Victor were still alive. Walton also said that what Adam felt was not pity, that he was just lamenting because the death of victor withdrew him from his power. Adam said that his crimes turned him worse than any animal, but pointed out the double standard people who hate him, but not those who mistreated him. Adam said that the only solution was coming suicide. Adam said the farewell to the Victor’s coƒƒіn and escaped by the window and disappeared in the ice-raft.
☙Epilogue❧
Walton feels that he need so badly to meet and have a talk with Ernest and Rose. ¿ İt is true that Adam promised to commit suicide, but who are going to believe in a murderer like him, specially if two persons close to Victor are still alive?
Victor was able to make creatures like Adam and Eve. İt is not impossible to say that another scientist could make the same scientiƒіc discoveries by a completely independent way, in a kind of scientiƒіc convergence. They could contact a scientist that could revert the Eve’s sterility; this scientist could also use some samples of tissues from them to create an army of creatures of their race…
But this is still an open case… For example, is not known what happened with the Rose’s missing father. Also, Adam and Eve are still somewhere out there…
¿ Who knows the future?
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